Letter 10
Dear Tim,
Your niece must be really good at skating! She even made the team for "Disney on Ice" shows. Colleen and her are now in Ireland because the troupe is in Dublin, and Colleen decide to take advantage of it to spend some time with her daughter. The role that Echo played was "Wendy" from "Peter Pan" and "Anna" from "Frozen". In your news letter, I can imagine Toomevera is a small town with few people and lots of animals and crops.
It is my turn to tell you about my days. I have been under lots of pressure these days, including the midterm exam, my cello lessons, and Summer's homeworks. I hope you can give me some advice.
Your niece must be really good at skating! She even made the team for "Disney on Ice" shows. Colleen and her are now in Ireland because the troupe is in Dublin, and Colleen decide to take advantage of it to spend some time with her daughter. The role that Echo played was "Wendy" from "Peter Pan" and "Anna" from "Frozen". In your news letter, I can imagine Toomevera is a small town with few people and lots of animals and crops.
It is my turn to tell you about my days. I have been under lots of pressure these days, including the midterm exam, my cello lessons, and Summer's homeworks. I hope you can give me some advice.

Comments
Whether you know it or not, one of the most important things that you are supposed to be learning right now is how to organize your time, and how to adjust your priorities. Somewhere in your head, or even written down, you have to have this list of things that you need to do, in order of their importance.
The top of the list will probably be school, and work that you need to do for school; the second thing will be "keeping parents happy", and what you need to do to keep your parents on your good side, or you on their good side. Third will be "outside activities" that you enjoy doing, but are not critical to Points one and two. Sorry, but your cello probably fits into that catagory. Finally, there are activities with friends. Although these may be some of the most enjoyable things for you to do, and may seem like the most important at the time, they're really not. It's very easy for your 'friends" to drag you away to do many very enjoyable things that will take so much of your time that you won't have enough time left to do that things that you actually should be doing. Like school, and keeping parents happy.
Show this to Summer, and see what she has to say.
Tim
Good job on "The Tree Lady"!
Tim